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Three words people dream of each night before sleep,
Three words parents teach of with birds and with bees,
Three words grant a smile and set things to ease,
Three words people wish for to bring sweet relief.

Three words that were given and taken away,
Rip out a heart, leave a soul disarrayed,
A smile is broken, the sky fades to grey,
Three words became false and a heart fell astray.

Pick up the pieces, its never the same,
Three words once they're stolen are forever changed,
A burden so heavy it borders deranged,
Weighs down shoulders and hearts to leave a soul drained.

So when saying three words, please make sure they're true,
For once taken away, they cannot be renewed.
lalalalala class time well spent
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Horizonbird Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
I love the simplicity - raw and unarguable. Class time well spent indeed :)
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Tsukinushi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
Thank you so much :D
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PaladinEclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this is amazing. I love how you transitioned between each stanza and created such a great flow. Good job! :D
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Tsukinushi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012
fanksss >///>
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PaladinEclipse Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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